The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the step-by-step procedure for converting geothermal energy into electricity. Overall, the method to produce current using geothermal energy is divided into five major steps, firstly cold water, secondly the injection well, thirdly the production well, fourthly condenser and finally generator turbine. The 1st, 4th and 5th steps are performed on the surface of the earth while the 2nd and 3rd phases are executed beneath the earth.
The cold water from the top of the surface is pumped 4.5km inside the injection well, which then passes through geothermal zone made from hot rocks. This zone heats the water and connects to the production well that pushes hot water outside on the surface in the condenser. Furthermore, the condenser boils H2O until vaporised, this precedes us to the final stage of electricity manufacturing.
The last phase of electricity generation is divided into 2 sub-parts. In part, one turbine is powered in a circular motion by the steam collected in phase 4, in order to generate electricity that is then stored in the generator (part 2 of phase 5) that passes the current to the powerhouse ready to be supplied to the consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... phases are executed beneath the earth. The cold water from the top of the surfa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, then, third, thirdly, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15544041451 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78962498746 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585492227979 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7829694725 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 5.23603664747 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749202275364 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336727092897 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532376865153 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480572831204 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578364652196 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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