Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, most of the people hold the opinion that single working field is a better option for the work of whole life while, some oppose to this they believe various types of organisations are coupsily for a person. I will delve both facets before reaching to reasoned conclusion.
There are multifarious benefits of having the work under the same fields. Firstly, it gives great deal of experience. If a person continously doing the job as well as lot of contribution given by them then he does not do any type of mistake.However, those people who prefer the different organisations, they have lack of experience because they have multiple jobs and the concentration of the people divided on all things. Therefore, it is difficult to focus on single goal.
On the other hand, in some cases different work fields help to a person First of all, it is a big opportunity meet with other people and learn many things. Due to the jobs mostly people go to the various kinds of fields and they have a seen other environment. The capability of learning will increase in a significant amount whereas, the another side not learn more skill .Because which they work it is always similar same people and same work.
By epitomising, it depends on the needs and interest of the people because both single and different organisations are cherised for the working people.
- The Chart below gives information about southland's main exports in 2000,2018 and future projections for 2025. 78
- There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is traditional music of a country more important than international music or not? 61
- The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in thrèe different countries in the U.S state of oregon. 84
- The Chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. 78
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...then he does not do any type of mistake.However, those people who prefer the different ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other hand, in some cases different work fields help to a person First of all, i...
^^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... different work fields help to a person First of all, it is a big opportunity me...
^^
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s, the another side not learn more skill .Because which they work it is always sim...
^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
... the another side not learn more skill .Because which they work it is always similar sa...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, as well as, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84549356223 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81963470114 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583690987124 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0122490623 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379712678396 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136565433441 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110478096513 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242090053864 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729614137579 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.