In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending money in buying more and more items. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Over the past few years, there has been a significant rise in the amount of money being spent by people. It can be said that, nowadays, as the people are earning more money than their predecessors, they are spending more. I strongly agree with this statement, and in this essay, I will explain my support with reasons.
One of the crucial reasons for individuals spending more money is that this habit directly benefits their country’s economy. It does that by helping businesses grow which, in turn, results in stronger economy. For instance, people buying food from a small grocery shop would allow the shop to grow as a business. In contrast, if people lowered their spending on different products, this is likely to cause a negative impact on the businesses, leading to a weaker economy.
Furthermore, masses spending more and more money is likely to result in more employment opportunities. If a tiny coffee shop, for example, becomes famous and started receiving a numerous customers every day, this will force the employer to hire more people. These low class newly created jobs may benefit the illiterate population. In addition, these jobs can also be seen acquired by teenagers or students. Due to this job creation, the whole country would have more workforce which is likely to result in country’s development.
In conclusion, according to the benefits offered by increased spending on items by masses, such as strengthening the economy and more job creation, I believe that this is behaviour Is a positive which outweighs all and any negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8375545768 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0959737495 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309531231217 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10720350373 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111733671104 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177001367812 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532952576057 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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