City or country life?
From the dawn of humanity, selecting a proper and decent accommodation was of great challenge for human beings. Nowadays, this challenge turn into a new concern that is whether one should prefer a country life or live in a city. As far as I am concern, the advantages of city life outweigh those of country life. Significant advantages of city life for me are better health care, more decent children’s upbringing, and modern technology and facilities in city.
Health, in both aspects of physically and mentally, is one of the most prominent concern of humankinds. From the childhood until death, need to the hospitals and doctors is one of the priority of people. Even though country life is a chance to meal fresh fruits, healthy foods, and so on; but the state-of-the-art hospitals, expertized doctors, and modern apparatus are the undeniable advantages of city life. In the emergency situations, reach to the modern hospital is of concern for the country’s people. So, this important facet of city which is very vital for people who live there, solely, could convince me that city life is preferable.
Upbringing of the offspring in a talent-growing-atmosphere is the biggest worry for any parents. It is crystal clear that the atmosphere of a place has its impact on the children whether good or bad. Country, even by its corruption-free atmosphere, is incapable to proliferate the talent of all students due to the lack of opportunity of taking apart to a wide variety fields in order to find the ability of students. On the other hand, providing the various educational and sport centers, city can help the students and the young to grow and develop quickly in the desirable area and/or endowed talent. Worth to be noticed that the level of communication of settler in the city is much higher than village dwellers. It has no need to prove that a child who has a better communication could pave the ways of success process easier than those who have less interaction with others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
...alent-growing-atmosphere is the biggest worry for any parents. It is crystal clear that t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94065281899 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10641819812 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0340779786 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381473509255 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118324722975 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155221114172 0.0737576698707 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264223342105 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145621036955 0.0645574589148 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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