In some countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary era, most of commodities has been produced by big companies and, people get lots of benefits of it. While, our quality of life has changing due to big companies like Tata, automobiles and so on. I am totally agree with the statement and shall explain the same in the upcoming paragraphs.
Admittedly, people depend more on gadgets then they ever had before. It is ofcourse a serious concer. Because modern man do not understand the fact that multinational companies is a threat to their lives. Moreover, people forget about their own ability as they all rely on companies for the basic purposes. For instance, in Canada before starting of twenty first century usage of gadgets had been banned and people had to work for their purposes.
Moving Futher, there is great concern about our health because most of the people rely on their products despite thinking about the effect of their products. The best epitome of this could be a survey conducted by Delhi government claimed that uptill 2025 almost every single person in India will rely on multinational nationals products and these will lead to many causes related to health and environment.
To conclude, despite of being a big threat to mankind products of big companies is currently used by many people which changes the lives of the people but, instead of too much reliability on machine products a person should not forget about the of their own brain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the commodities') or simply say ''most commodities''.
Suggestion: most of the commodities; most commodities
In the contemporary era, most of commodities has been produced by big companies and,...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ta, automobiles and so on. I am totally agree with the statement and shall explain th...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...mittedly, people depend more on gadgets then they ever had before. It is ofcourse a ...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...efore. It is ofcourse a serious concer. Because modern man do not understand the fact t...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
... instance, in Canada before starting of twenty first century usage of gadgets had been banne...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...health and environment. To conclude, despite of being a big threat to mankind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5662387781 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1688472511 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.818181818 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196411423981 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724181851629 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381751927583 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105191420482 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200470868132 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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