In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the pros and cons of tourism in under developed countires. Some people think that tourism generates numerous problems for developing countires, while others maintain that tourism has excessive advantages. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in developing countries.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with the advantages of tourism. Firstly, the most conspicuous is that the tourism allows more influx of money and creates more job oppurtunities for the local population. Not only tourism generates more employment ventures but also it boosts the economy of a country. For instance, economies of countries like Thailand, Indonesia and Bali are heavily dependent on tourism industry. As a result, it is quite evident that excessive benefits are associated with tourism.
On the other hand, there exists another pivotal facet of tourism which entails heavy burden on the government. Therefore, the governments of under developing countries will be required to fulfill the basic necessities and commodities of their citizens as well as the tourists. For example, governments will have to ensure provisioning of standard food, accommodation, water and electricity for the tourists to keep this business sector alive. As a matter of fact, tourism also imposes heavy burden on the local government.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that the boosting of economy and generation of more job ventures by tourism in developing countries make the advantages triumph over disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...untries will be required to fulfill the basic necessities and commodities of their citizens as we...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...developing countries make the advantages triumph over disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6762295082 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04175402286 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577868852459 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3887957397 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386454766512 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142836305558 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150376017446 0.071462118173 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23395329453 0.151781067708 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141010111378 0.0609392437508 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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