many criminals re-offend after they have been crimes. why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is true that many offenders commit further crimes whey they are released. There could be several reasons for this, and governments can take steps to address this issue.
There are a variety of reasons to blame for those who break the law after imprisonment. Firstly, criminal record is a deterrent for finding a job, so due to long-term unemployment and difficulties for making a living ex-criminals are forced into re-offending. Secondly, delinquents’ friends and other prisoners in their cells have a significant negative role. They have always new plans which seem tempting, and because of deficiencies in criminal’s personality, they tend towards acting as an offender. Finally, inadequate education makes finding a proper job more difficult means little by little poverty puts them in trouble.
In my opinion, governments and societies could solve the problems described above. I suggest that prisoners receive vocational training. As they learn some new skills, the possibility of being employed will raise and there will be job opportunities for them. Another issue is that discrimination needs to be eliminated, and employer must not judge based on their criminal records. Furthermore, one of the prison’s aim is rehabilitation which means offenders will re-educate. Their programs prepare prisoners for release into society, as a result they become better citizens and trustable for responsibilities. Also, community services such as clean public areas help them to reform and be beneficial for societies.
In conclusion, governments and societies could certainly implement a range of measures to act as a deterrent for recommitting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'crimes'' or 'crime's'?
Suggestion: crimes'; crime's
...true that many offenders commit further crimes whey they are released. There could be ...
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Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aw after imprisonment. Firstly, criminal record is a deterrent for finding a job,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58498023715 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2779835966 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664031620553 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.149728415 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201180784957 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620501636258 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054122624913 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1183852601 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065783827537 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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