Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are certain factors such as honesty, understanding, loyalty that everyone takes into account a relationship. Honesty seems to be one of the most basic social etiquettes that anyone should grasp and fully apply in their daily interaction with others. Definitely, some people if asked would agree with the statement honesty is the most consideration in any relationship, while others would state that the answer the question depends on great deal factors such as how his/her earlier relationship was. In my view, telling the truth should be considered as the most factor in any relationship.
The first and most exquisite point to be mentioned is that telling the truth can cause mutual confiding. When you are honest with others even though, in a complicated and hard situation, it would make you’re relationship stronger. If you quick glance to your surrounded you would see many of the relationships between couples and also friends destroyed because of hiding the truth. I always see a positive influence of honesty in my parent relationship. My parents who are I can classify as a really happy marriage. One thing I have noticed about they is honesty in the way they communicate. This factor makes their life stronger.
Last but not the least, sometimes people think telling the truth may hurt peoples feeling. However, hiding truth may devastate opportunity to change the condition. For instance, if a doctor conceals the reality from a patient who has a severe disease, like cancer, since he afraid that the patient would be in terror. Because of that patient lose his chance to enjoy the last day of his life and socialize with family and friends.
In conclusion, telling the truth always should be considered as the main factor of a relationship. Maybe sometimes disguise the truth be easy and less troublesome than telling the fact but one day, the secret reveals and you may not have any chance to compensate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...ge. One thing I have noticed about they is honesty in the way they communicate. Th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...may not have any chance to compensate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03426791277 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78905118176 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557632398754 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1357653218 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251425317749 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758294620166 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064522141328 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148345051834 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581294765001 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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