What are the benefits of living in the big cities as opposed to the rural areas? What are problems faced by rural areas and solution and what is the solution to it?
Change is part of life and is always want for the evolution of the mankind. It is a highly controversial issue that people should live in a big city or in a country area. Some people believe that big cities are good for living while some ignore this stance. In this essay, I am going to deliver indispensable arguments before jumping to necessary arguments.
To begin with the positive side, There are myriad benefits of living in the big cities but the most conspicuous one is, in the cities, one can have the abundance of focal facilities like an education, employment, medical and many more. Moreover, people can live with the current trend and enjoy their life in their way without any restrictions.
However, there are also pitfalls existing with the above positive points. Firstly, in the rural area, there is scare of basic facilities like an education, medical and the transportation. Secondly, people in the rural area are the most orthodox and middle of the road which thing came out in one of the surveys by the local news channel.
Apparently, the above problems of the rural area can be solved if the younger generation educates elder. They should make realize them about recent improvement and innovation in the technology. This would not only help in changing the attitude of the elder people but overall outlook will be changed gradually and slowly.
To sum up, from the above-mentioned point, it is quite clear that living in the cities have more benefits compared to living in the rural area, however, with the passage of the time, our elder generation will also move towards cities.
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...neration will also move towards cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83211678832 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53914948152 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3330255396 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216375931243 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777338453297 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825368755647 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120540011709 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373811597535 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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