As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you thing the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
The automobile purchase has unarguably gone up in most developing countries. In my opinion, personal transport brings about more problems for the environment in comparision to any individual benefits it might bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits for the individual who own their own car. Firstly, a personal car insures transport convinience. That is to say, it reduces one's reliance on both public and shared transports, this provides the individual with the ability to reach work, on time. Not only does personal transport help one's punctuality, but also improves work quality. Since the travel time greatly reduces employees tend to be more efficient and less lazy at work, consequently being more productive for thr employer and the country in the long run. Personal benefits of owning a car extend to individuals of all age groups,take for instance, high school students who usually require travelling between school and their part time jobs. This was initially a very time taking task, but with development and affordability most students now have a personal car, even if its second hand. This has insured that students are able to apply themselves more effectively and fulfill their financial and academic responsibilities easily.
nevertheless, despite the advantages above, I believe having more personal cars can lead to extremely detrimental side effects on the environment. One potentially serious problem, that the increasing number of cars has brought is the cumulative green house effect. As a result of rapidly increasing fuel consumption and the consequent carbon dioxide, global warming is at a rise. Resulting in the melting of ice caps, consequently increasing volume at the river banks, thus resulting in water logging of adjacent agricultural land. This is coupled with flooding as a result of increased rains and climate change all over the world. Another obvious issue, are the health hazards that come along with the increased amount of car exhaust gases. Recent researches have quoted, that the millennials suffer from chronic chest infections more often than their ancestors, as an outcome of their increased daily exposure to harmful gases. These facts validate all environmental concern that comes along with the increasing number of personal transports all over the world.
To reiterate, I believe side effects like loosing our ecosystem and health of our future generation far outweigh any individual benefits that personal transport might bring.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44845360825 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86735115135 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5534337686 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.263157895 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163035419651 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464975868182 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585488523568 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104967091295 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627462267428 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.