"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Every society which aims to thrive needs to think carefully on teaching young people to be good leaders in every field. Without solid leadership skills there will be no reasanable policies enjoying wide support and no strong companies improving the economy of the country. However, the opinions on what constituties a good leader differ dramatically. Some people believe that a great leader is a great competitor, while others think that the skill of cooperating effectively with other people is the key. In my opinion, both views have some truth in them, however, I believe that cooperation is more important than competition.
Most people have heard that competition is the basis of market economy and that it is cooperation that gives companies the incentive to innovate and imporve their products and their efficiency. The same can be said about the world of politics. In democratic world, the competition between parties and candidants for presidency is an essential reason for political actors' willingness to listen to people and to address the problems important for the nation. One can say that the modern world is found on competition, thus, the skill of competing is the key to success. It may be true, but I think that society needs more than presidents and CEOs of successful companies. Few people will reach that. That society really needs is people who are able to communicate with others well, and there are two main resaons for that.
Firstly, it is often impossible to compete effectively on your own. For instance, a candidat for presidentcy needs funding and wide public support. His campaign is led by experts in many different fields. Without effective communication with them the candidat won't be able to build effective team no matter how competitative he is. Without a good team combining different types of extertise he is doomed to lose the election. So, it is essential to have a net of people working towards the same goal. That will be easier to achieve for a person who grew up in the spirit of coopertion.
Secondly, cooperation is important for everyday operation of an organization. If a president who cares only about competition is elected, he or she will find it exteremely difficult to do their work. A government is an enormous organization consisting of people with different political views and different fields of expertise. In order to make informed, efficient choices, the president must be able to find a way to communicate with these people effectively. He or she should remember that they have the same goal, a prosperous country. It is impossible to lead the goverment without excellent interpersonal skills. The education which empaphises teamwork is likely to help to develop them.
To sum up, I am convinced that a good leader should be exceptional at cooperation with the people he or she leads. While competion has a lot of benefits and ability to live in the competitative environment is extremely important, a person without communication skills is likely to lose in this environment. So I believe that leaders should be taught to cooperate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'actors'' or 'actor's'?
Suggestion: actors'; actor's
...cy is an essential reason for political actors willingness to listen to people and to ...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...port. His campaign is led by experts in many different fields. Without effective communication...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2598.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 512.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07421875 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95976229976 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498046875 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7968773829 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5862068966 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6551724138 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65517241379 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141317426481 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366790092721 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402041962015 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796847661571 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390192402132 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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