One of the consequences of improves medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you thing the advantages of this development is outweigh the disadvantages?
Technology has revolutionised the way of our life. The advent of technology has improved many sectors for a business to a medicens. Hospitals and clinics have also implemented new technology in their field to provide a good healthy treatments. People are living more longer than in the past and life circle is improving day by day.
Firstly, by implementing a high tech machinary in health care such as hospitals, clinics and pharmacy have seen major improvement in human life. Doctors operate in advanced machine and aware of current problems and prescribe good effective madicens as well as nuteration. By careful diet plan patient become more healthier than before. For example, my friend had a bad stomach pain and acidity. Doctor acknowledged her the causes and wrote a madicens as well as a good healthy diet plan. By this experience she will be more care full in the future.
Secondly, people are becoming more aware of their health by the internet. Many gyms and recreational centre have opened in my town in the last decade. To stay active and fit people prefer to do various kind of exercise and follow a good diet plan. For example, there are more than 4 gyms in my town, besides nuteriation clinic is also available while in the past there was only one gym with very old machines. People who practice a healthy life style they live longer than ordinary people.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that by improvement in health care centres provide myriad of benefits to human and there are lot of advantages of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'treatment'?
Suggestion: treatment
...n their field to provide a good healthy treatments. People are living more longer than in ...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'longer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: longer
...d healthy treatments. People are living more longer than in the past and life circle is imp...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...on. By careful diet plan patient become more healthier than before. For example, my friend had...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85877862595 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65660096717 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4654089135 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177157374252 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05628598388 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558793909432 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107574523465 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184644231672 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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