You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college;
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her;
- suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.
Dear Rodrigo,
First of all, let me ask you how have you been doing? We was not able to talk much since our last meeting after the vacation. Well, I am pleased that you came to me with this important matter about attend to college or look for a job.
To begin with, I think colleges are a waste of money and time nowadays because you spend nearly 4 years to get a degree by watching classes you may not like as part of a scheduled and also have to pay the student loans. For example, do you remeber Carlos our classmate in the senior year? He was accepted in a very prestigious college but, unfortunately, he do not posses enough money for the whole course, so he got a loan with a harmful interest to pay after the graduation.
In addition, if you focus in enter into the job market and start early in a profession, you will get experience to reach for higher positions in the company; despite your age you are eager for knowledge and you will not say no to any task that might be given to you. Maybe this can be an excellent counterweight to your lack of background.
Although you wish to start in a good profession and with a nice paycheck, I hope you consider lower positions in the companies at this very moment like an assistant, help desk, support in a call center or even an internship during the holidays. My father have great connections and he could help you to arange some meetings in your behalf.
Therefore, I cannot wait to receive your replay on this topic to assist you as soon as possible.
Kind regards,
Mathew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[6]
Message: Use first person plural verb with 'we': 'are', 'were'.
Suggestion: are; were
... me ask you how have you been doing? We was not able to talk much since our last me...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...stigious college but, unfortunately, he do not posses enough money for the whole c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42657342657 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48006379282 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0221829518 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254841692835 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086524973635 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545552530371 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140307497292 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338501922784 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.