Recently, the freedom to work and live anywhere has become the main trend due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of these developments outweigh the disadvantages?
Discuss using reasons and examples to support your point(s).
Advancement in the communication technology and transportation has made the life much easier than the older times as people have the freedom to work and live anywhere. There are various advantages of the development in the communication technology and transportation that outweigh the disadvantages which are discussed as following.
First and foremost, people can choose and decide their future career through the facilities of internet. They can even decide the place of work and kind of work they want to pursue in their life. Communication technology has provided the number of faculties like internet and social sites where they can find out the best opportunities by sitting at their places. For example, one can choose the job and its place from the number of opportunities on the internet.
Secondly, with the transportation facilities any person can reach to the places of their residence and work without worrying about the distance. There are several transportation means like trains, buses and air transport that facilitate the public fast travel than the older times. Therefore, it has become possible for the people to live and work anywhere.
According to the above mentioned points, one can reach out to conclusion that development of communication technology and transportation has increased the trend of working and living anywhere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41509433962 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10261204394 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52358490566 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.417776524 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193519760234 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898741289857 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999223068666 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147824358908 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102004488243 0.0609392437508 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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