People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
Over the past few decades, it has been witnessed that residents are lacking sense of security wherever they are. There are a number of reasons behind this situation and several feasible solutions should be recommended to tackle this problem.
To begin with, there are two primary causes explaining the anxiety citizens are suffering. Firstly, the way by which criminals commit their crimes has been so complicated that even careful and circumspect social member can be victimized. For example, although Internet security measures are taken, an excessive load of victims of online scam and black-hat computer hackers are reported annually. Another reason stems from people’s shaken belief on the authority. Indeed, severe crimes committed by government members like embezzlement makes them less likely to fulfill citizens’ expectation about their ability to assure the domestic tranquility. Moreover, even when criminals are brought to justice, the court sometimes tends to be soft on crime by extenuating circumstances, which are not strict enough to prevent people from illegal behaviors.
However, measures must be taken by the government to alleviate the issue. Specifically, a full-scale investigation into severe cases must be launched on a regular basis. Not only does this helps elucidate the truth but also provides security bodies with experience to protect people from similar circumstances. Additionally, maintaining the policy of zero tolerance is also necessary. Particularly, verdicts must serve out their custodial sentences rather than have chance to be prematurely released. Indeed, if the government becomes tough on crime and always applies the full weight of the law, citizens will less likely to get involved in evil actions.
Briefly, only by addressing the concerns of local people will their insecurity feeling be improved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'help'?
Suggestion: help
... on a regular basis. Not only does this helps elucidate the truth but also provides s...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l their insecurity feeling be improved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.675 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93599885656 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4100945895 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0718900935069 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231436529073 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241249430629 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489837383015 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178795195809 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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