Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are role model for youngsters. Do you support it or not?
The important effect of role models, which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial, because they encourage the people in difficulties. so that some people think famous players and film actors have become role models for adults. this essay will discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in this era fashion has become big issue, therefore many person copy their style to look more attractive. Secondly, sometimes when youngsters choose their future in the life, then they are motivated by movies of favorite film stars due to which they achieve success in challenging fields.
On the flip side, but youngsters have also another role models like politicians or writers, they also encouraged from them by writing their novels or books and listening their speeches. Besides this, parents and teachers also play an important role in youngsters life, because they learn many things from them, like ethical values and study, even their care and study dependent on the parents and teachers and adults spend lots of time with teachers and family members.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. so that I think knowledge is like sea which cannot be demolished, therefore youngsters will choose where can they learn better.
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...gsters will choose where can they learn better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23557692308 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4727013637 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9730584742 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.25397266985 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105572760692 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433854501531 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564179445263 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612476449431 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432367717638 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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