Some people say that Olympic games are not relevant in 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?
The prime purpose of Olympic games is to promote international peace, unity, friendship and corporation within communities through the medium of sports. This legacy was started in 18th century and since then these games are organized on leap years at different locations. I strongly disagree with the notion that in coming era’s this traditional sports competition would consider as irrelevant. This essay will first discuss the importance of Olympics to boom the economy and secondly the significance of global sports in 21st century, followed by reasoned conclusion.
To start with, since the centuries Olympics games are organized at various destinations like in 2018 at Pyeongchang and in 2010 at Vancouver. The empirical research statistics revealed that these nations have generated revenue in billions of dollars from various channels of tourist spending like trade, tourism, service industries such as travel enterprises and hotels. As a result, foreign investment increased which ploughed back into the economy to improve its infrastructure and other sectors. Thus it is agreed that Olympic games are lucrative that supports economy to foster and are significant in foreseeable future as well.
Another insight that must not be neglected, international sports spread peace and friendship. Admittedly, world has already faced detrimental effects after two world wars and now the countries are fighting with each other due to nuclear power and oil reserves. Undoubtedly, despite several initiatives by UNO on global platform, these issues remained unresolved. However, Olympics, FIFA world cup and ICC tournaments are proved to be practical to support international peace and unity. Hence, it is undeniable that Olympics are not worthy in 21st century.
To conclude, Olympic games are deemed to accrue financial benefits that also flourish the economy. Moreover, these international events are very important to sustain peace in the world. It is predicted that if such sports events will continue, economies of the world will be boomed alongside with strong bonding.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61392405063 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89885854578 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629746835443 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4758255413 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143869583938 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504101939448 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643600842479 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822389389484 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351856315759 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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