Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As we all are living in a world of advanced technology, as a result of which use of computer is increased in our daily life. I agree that computer has lot many benefits but its drawbacks could not be ignored.
To begin with, computer is a demand of today's society and it had added more pace in our life. In most of the work places and educational institutions, paper work is totally replaced with technology. For an instance, I am an international student and has observed completely different educational system from India.My whole study is computer based even tests and assignments are being submitted electronically by using college e- link. Moving further, a PC can be seen in every home as most of the children plays video games and preparing their projects.
Considering these many advantages, the few disadvantages can not be overlooked that occurs in the form lost personal interaction and replaced by emails. Health issues is also one of the most considerable challenge and a regular use of computer for long-lasting hours has effect on the eye vision of young children. For students, it could result in the loss of their study stuff as sometimes unknown programs and virus can harm the data that could be more convenient for them if they could prepare their paper notes.
In conclusion, using computer is one of the basic necessity for us, even it helps us to save our time and energy by minimising our efforts. So, I believe the pros of this manmade gift outweighs the flaws that it has.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83076923077 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80264034428 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3033117845 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.181818182 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155115702323 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558697936564 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406113590474 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883682512826 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274244761054 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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