The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Modern man has raised from the bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed, accompanied by vast improvements in standards of living. Likewise, the world has become a smaller place becau8se of globalization, due to which many individuals dread that culture will be vanished as a result. I partially agree with this topic and I will discuss both statements in upcoming paragraphs and give my opinion.
To begin with, it is right said that change is the law of nature, because it keep pace with changing times. MOreover, people can communicate with others on internet or telephones, which save their time and energy, because they can solve some problems by communicating on their mobiles, due to which the do not have to go anywhere. Furthermore, nowdays anyone can buy any product on the internet even they can do any work with help of internet.
On the other hand, some people think that it is fully wastage of money because some teenagers attract towards foreign cultures, due to which they argue with their parents for buying that products, due to which some cultures and traditions will be disappeared easily from the world. Besides this, internet slso distract the students from the study, because they spend whole day on front of computer screens, due to which cannot pay attention on their education.
In conclusion every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion internet or other type of globalization has become helpful of all people, but people should not misuse or overuse of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeps'?
Suggestion: keeps
...change is the law of nature, because it keep pace with changing times. MOreover, peo...
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Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nicating on their mobiles, due to which the do not have to go anywhere. Furthermore, n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, likewise, moreover, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90494296578 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62000639102 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.266133098 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.25397266985 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213930026247 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788921130366 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964033145543 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119355570732 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668020395285 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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