In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
It is true that there are several changes not only in family’s organization but also the responsibilities of members in modern world. In my opinion, I believe that these have both positive and negative impacts on offspring.
Nowadays, families in many countries are not as large as they used to be because parents tend to have fewer children. There were numerous children who lived in poverty families did not have opportunities to approach educational system in the past. One of reasons is that parents had many children and they did not have enough money to take care of all their kids. However, today, their living standard can be improved due to birth control. As a result, most of children can be gone to school instead of working to support their family.
The second significant change is working mothers. While traditional women stayed at home to cook, clean and look after children, more and more modern ones have entered the workforce. On the one hand, finance in dual-income families will be stable rather than other families where only man have a job. On the other hand, both parents work full-time, so that children can be left alone, or with babysitters leading to the lack of closeness and many conflicts in families. A a result, children spend more time with friends or the internet, that can become the negative influences on children’s behaviors.
In conclusion, I think the changes occurring to a family’s hierarchy and members’ responsibilities are a positive step toward a better world. Nonetheless, parents should also notice its drawbacks to bring up offspring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: A
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Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'A' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: A; A
...oseness and many conflicts in families. A a result, children spend more time with f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, nonetheless, second, so, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0946969697 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96181845698 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7731114662 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158860577218 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607181226138 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683442200491 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124001746384 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641469254131 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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