People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about?
In recent years, there has been colossal upsurge in the ongoing trend of people migrating between the countries for better prospects of the life, be it an impoverished or affluent nation. Some people believe that switching between countries is always a positive outcome, while few argue that stay in same country, and to look after the outstanding facets for their own country. In this essay, I will elaborate both the important aspects of life.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits, first, people migrating to countries for better future scopes. For example, in some countries, students find themselves lack of further studies and due to poor facilities, they lack to meet further education & they keen to commence with further studies for future growth and good jobs. Hence, it is needless to say that switching country to country for future growth is always powerful tool.
Moreover, another pivotal facet of the argument is that moving to other countries will thrive to decline the development of their own country. For instance, as most of the people after their self-stability and better jobs they ignore to back to their countries and thus resulting the fact of their own country is devastating stage in such criminal activities. One should look after and return for development their own country with the latest technologies that have the positive impact of their country.
To recapitulate from the arguments aforementioned, one can conclude that despite of having advantages of moving to the cities, but the upsides that can look for limiting the migration the purpose to other countries is also apropos option and are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15441176471 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66373162957 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547794117647 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.128944777 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.2 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133138186088 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612573563891 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328524680506 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851627065628 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225603582943 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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