Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that finding a job in today's competitive world may prove to be a hideous task. Some people believe that, higher education is essential for securing a job. While others argue that, experience and practical skills is much more important. I completely agree with the latter view as communication and on field experience helps recruiters incur less cost in development of employees. This essay with discuss both views with examples.
On the one hand, due to tremendous increase in competition, many parents are concerned of their child's future. Hence, many individuals believe that further studies is important to gain knowledge and in-turn to get employed. This is because many employer's seek for employees having good subject knowledge. To illustrate, investment bankers desiring to work in Morgan Stanley, a renowned multi-national investment bank, have prerequisites of having knowledge in financial markets. As a consequence, one may have to pursue a course in this field to gain sufficient knowledge before approaching the recruiter. In short, education is plays a vital role in providing extensive knowledge which is likely to help individuals to get their desired job.
On the other hand, I believe that communication is one of the most essential skill required for securing a job. This is because, all jobs require people to communicate with each other, at all times to complete the required tasks efficiently. To illustrate, if a recruiter is seeking for a receptionist and the hired personnel is unable to communicate fluently then the customers will not be happy and the work will be hampered. Additionally, having practical skills is also important to complete the work without much assistance and training. This is because companies may not want to bear cost for developing their staff. For instance, if a doctor does not have any practical experience, then they will not be able to treat the patient's disease. In other words, being able to communicate and have hands on field experience is likely to find more open jobs in the market.
To conclude, to attain subject knowledge, education is important. However, in my opinion, soft skills such as communication and experience is ultimately required for securing a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to find more open jobs in the market. To conclude, to attain subject knowledge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in short, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23756906077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01638232241 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524861878453 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3325666578 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255574986709 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766796108255 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583848617456 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159002126686 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575817331868 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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