It is difficult for people in the cities getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
Today, urban residents find it almost impossible to get an adequate workout and stay in shape. While several triggers are lying behind this problem, many reliable methods can be applied to tackle it.
On the one hand, this disturbing reality is rooted in two main reasons. Firstly, the hectic schedule of modern society has swept metropolitans into the vortex of work, study, and family. Many city dwellers do not have enough time for sleep, let alone daily workouts. Children have to occupy themselves with school assignments and examinations while adults must focus most of their time and effort on their career in order to climb the promotion ladder. These kinds of study and work commitment deprive of their time for sufficient exercise. Secondly, in today’s digital age, individuals tend to spend their free time on virtual entertainments like online games or social media websites instead of taking physical training. Since such virtual activities are highly addictive and time-consuming, the more time they spend on them, the more dependent they become. This results in them preferring a sedentary lifestyle and neglecting other energetic and healthy activities.
On the other hand, there are still many feasible solutions for this issue. At first, governing and educational bodies could introduce new regulations in order to reduce weekly working and studying time to an acceptable amount. As a result, people would have more time for energetic exercises. Furthermore, despite the fact of being busy, city residents could and should integrate physical activities into their daily lives such as walking more or taking the stairs whenever possible. Finally, authorities and social organizations should promote the benefits of doing workouts, thus raising citizens’ awareness of staying healthy by doing physical activities and encouraging them to spend their spare time on exercising every day.
In conclusion, although there are two primary reasons which cause lacking physical activities of urban dwellers, various attainable measures can be adopted to eliminate this concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54037267081 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77214230587 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645962732919 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2359136298 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141434391408 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044980593182 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488906785487 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749764487911 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315304985166 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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