In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime but some people believe that these measure restricts our individual freedom.
it is incontrovertible fact that technology has become an essential part in people's life and they do not imagine their life without it. The cameras are second security so, people used to reduced the crime rate in general places. However, few masses accord that it has some impact on the privacy of people. this essay examines the merits and demerits of this gadget.
To embark with, there are plethora of benefits installed video cameras in national area. Firstly, this device control illegal activities which done by the people in public places. For example, criminals are stolen the things like bags, money on bus stations. If, the cameras are use in that places this tool can evoke the sense of fear among criminals and they do not do these type of activities. In addition to this it is also save women from those people who misbehave with her. As well as, it is control the children kidnapping because criminals can not do these type of activities under the restrictions of cameras.
On the other hand, it has some effect on the private life of people. Nowadays, many shopkeepers use it in a wrong way. To epitomize, in changing rooms they are use it and capture the picture or videos of people. After that, they are install it on the social networking sites in that way it has bad affect.
In conclusion, each coin has two aspects this device has more merits outweigh of demerits. because, it save the person's life from a lot of illegal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72156862745 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49275459116 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.661787618 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178940499602 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529978375872 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528603451564 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892204886184 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534716725606 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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