Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give the reason and relevant examples.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in people thought that they think some sports, which are dangerous should be banned, but there are others who say these sports give adventures in life and they are against to those who have the opposite opinion. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in other's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that masses enjoy in their life with these sports and these sports give strength to people to tackle with their inner fear and these sports cannot only contribute to civilian but lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stan one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chance of prosperity is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only one when follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. However, this why most are in favour of extreme sports.
In the view outlined above, everyone can conclude that the benefits of dangerous sports in life cannot be ignored at any cost and these are is too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81560283688 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58848731621 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2305116675 50.4703680194 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.454545455 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148445857117 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445544329587 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638794753507 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861211428608 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577977016069 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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