Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
Life is always challenging.We have to make preferences lots of time during lifetime. Some of our choices may be good but also many of them may not be good. We live according to our own preferences generally. However, sometimes we could not decide what to do and I agree that people should have to do things that they do not enjoy doing such as working with unfriendly guys,studying in a school reluctantly.
First of all , we need to work and earn money to live.Some people have a work place which may be unpleasant.For example; he has a manager who never thanks to his team or he may have a co-worker who always tends to illustrate a project’s success as if his own success.Needless to say, changing job contains much risk because in today’s world finding a job is very difficult and there are lots of people who are looking for a job.So, we should continue working in that place because of economic reasons even we do not enjoy staying there.
Secondly, we need to finish school education.During this period we have lots of lesson to pass.For instance in early education we have plenty of lessons and we are accepted to finish successfully. although we may not like mathematic or science lesson, we have to take these lessons as well.In addition to this we might not choose our teacher during our school time.Teacher may behave badly to us or we may not like the way he teach.Despite all these facts, we should keep up our education even though it is not enjoyable.
To sum up, we experience a lot of things during our life. Some of our experiences emerge with our own decisions and preferences, but some of them are not. Either we choose or not, sometimes we should spend our times in not enjoyable environment and should do things that we do not do <a href="https://tureng.com/en/turkish-english/willingfully" style="box-sizing: border-box; outline: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); text-decoration-line: underline; font-family: "Segoe UI", "Lucida Grande", "DejaVu Sans", "Helvetica Neue", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal;">willingfully</a>.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: We
Life is always challenging.We have to make preferences lots of time d...
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Suggestion:
...Some of our choices may be good but also many of them may not be good. We live a...
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...t also many of them may not be good. We live according to our own preferences ge...
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Suggestion: , studying
...ing such as working with unfriendly guys,studying in a school reluctantly. First of al...
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...in a school reluctantly. First of all , we need to work and earn money to live....
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Suggestion: Some
... we need to work and earn money to live.Some people have a work place which may be u...
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...ve a work place which may be unpleasant.For example; he has a manager who never tha...
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Suggestion: Needless
...ct's success as if his own success.Needless to say, changing job contains much risk...
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...ots of people who are looking for a job.So, we should continue working in that pla...
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...dly, we need to finish school education.During this period we have lots of lesson to ...
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...nish school education.During this period we have lots of lesson to pass.For insta...
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Suggestion: lots of lessons
...l education.During this period we have lots of lesson to pass.For instance in early education...
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... period we have lots of lesson to pass.For instance in early education we have ple...
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...we are accepted to finish successfully. although we may not like mathematic or science l...
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..., we have to take these lessons as well.In addition to this we might not choose ou...
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Suggestion: Teacher
...oose our teacher during our school time.Teacher may behave badly to us or we may not li...
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Suggestion: teaches
...dly to us or we may not like the way he teach.Despite all these facts, we should keep...
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... us or we may not like the way he teach.Despite all these facts, we should keep up our ...
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Suggestion:
... keep up our education even though it is not enjoyable. To sum up, we experience...
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Suggestion:
...a lot of things during our life. Some of our experiences emerge with our own deci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2865497076 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.96192953978 2.67179642975 186% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.647785155 48.9658058833 361% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.8 100.406767564 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2 5.45110844103 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18772388137 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084932472068 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160326188556 0.0737576698707 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142243160045 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120366800502 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 11.7677419355 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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