Some people think that environment problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give give your opinion
Few individuals believe that solution to environmental issues could be found by doing global efforts but few people support the idea of using national involvement. In my opinion, I consider that dealing it nationally would be far effective as the small input from each person would impact enormously towards fixing problems related to environment.
On the one hand, few people favor the idea of fixing issues regarding environment by making national efforts and I agree. As the core problem on which these issues arise are born mostly by the negligence and lack of awareness from individual citizens. By the helping programs from the state, people could fix all the major threats to the environment. For instance, they can do that by properly recycle waste which would not pollute the air, moreover, it could also be done by planting trees and avoid using products which are not environment friendly.
On the other hand, people who support the global scale involvement on dealing with environment issues might think that some problems which are huge to be handled by individual country, needs a global address. For example, the global warming has increased by the alarming rate, which has been melting glaciers in Antarctica and increasing the temperatures to all time high. This issue cannot be resolved by only one country as resources should be pooled from different countries to tackle with this issue.
To conclude, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that individual effort by each country stands a better chance to resolve environmental issues with efficient global impacts
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eover, it could also be done by planting trees and avoid using products which are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18532818533 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66030170655 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.9841392634 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.3 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228582951752 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899807335007 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793875603363 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146576479162 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573586710093 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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