Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The significance of computers in human history has been a controversial topic. While some say that these devices are the most groundbreaking invention in the last few centuries, I believe that the creation of the Internet is equally important.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that advent of computers has radically transformed different aspects of human society. To begin with, these machines have revolutionized our workplace, allowing information to be stored and shared in more secured ways. For instance, computer users can save and protect their files with passwords on their devices instead of having to preserve fragile physical documents. In addition, the advent of computers laid down the platform for other boundary-busting developments to take form. These include automation and the Internet, which are now integral elements in production lines and communication, respectively.
On the other hand, the Internet deserves just as much recognition as computers for several reasons. Forefront among these is the radical transformation done to communication by the Internet. This is best reflected in the growing popularity of social networking sites like Facebook or Twitter, thanks to which millions of people can stay connected with their loved ones over vast distances. Also, the Internet provides online spaces where information could be stored and shared. This feature gives the Internet more weight than computers, which are restricted to offline information storage.
In conclusion, while I acknowledge the importance of computers, I believe that the Internet is just as crucial in our world. In the future, it is predicted that the Internet will eventually surpass computers, which could be replaced by smart devices such as smartphones and tablets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ple can stay connected with their loved ones over vast distances. Also, the Internet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55719557196 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10558644185 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1635647583 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116193412287 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395203636862 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.019183147303 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710386647589 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251630874754 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.