what is the challenges of travelling
These days travelling has become one of the most famous way of taking a load off. In the eye of many travelling has lots of demerits. They think this way because not only would it be dangerous in some cases, but also it is an expensive way to take rest.I think this way which I would explore in the following essay.
The first challenges which should be pointed out is that a journey would lead to some dangers such as, accident. According to a new research which is conducted by university of Tehran researchers found that a considerable raise in the number of travelers, in Iran and the number of deaths due to car accident. These clearly shows a crystal clear correlation between in these tow things.
Another highlight which deserves some word is that, this being said, travelling can change our mood, but there are many better ways travelling would be expensive in some cases. As far as economy is concerned you can change your mood by hanging out, it would be an more cost-effective.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that travel would bring about lots of benefits, but its negative point outweigh over its positive point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76262626263 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60749412456 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5500886828 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124627532272 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582981265715 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562421327557 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702132804657 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016679910261 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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