Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the purchase of liquor illegally. Some people argue in prohibiting liquor to people and some argue on imposing laws to regulate the liquor sales. On my point of view, I agree in imposing legislature on liquor sales to alcoholics. In this essay, I shall discuss on the matters affecting this while analyzing both sides of it.
Firstly, there are myriad of advantages in regulating alcohol consumption of the society, such as reducing health issues causes with alcohols and it will automatically reduce the government expenditure on health because a significant amount of government income is spent on treating patients affected by alcohols. For instance, this move will also reduce illegal liquor products as well.
On the other hand, some people argue on prohibiting liquor purchases. For example, in middle east countries they have banned the sale of liquor to their citizens. It can be a violation of persons discretion on drinking. Apart from that, governments can increase their revenue by imposing taxes on liquor products.
In conclusion, it is recommended to impose regulations on the quantity of the alcoholic products purchases. Consequentely, government can mitigate the per head liuor consumption as well. It is also believed that liquor consumption should not be encouraged by the governments and even they can impose measurements in controlling the advertising of liquor products as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35193133047 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02136168395 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562231759657 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.2208809632 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9230769231 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223483947711 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800423746891 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049319754739 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131439397852 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023173481518 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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