The belching and unauthorized behaviour is unacceptable in modern offices. How far you support this view? Give your response with justification.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that belching and other unauthorized behavior is prohibited on office premises. In my opinion, this statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the main points of this statement before deducing a final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that certain unauthorized behaviors are strictly prohibited in modern office. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that belching is a natural phenomenon, and it is controlled by humans in formal situation which includes, working in office, in meeting places and in public areas. As a prime example, in this contemporary world belching is not allowed on professional sectors of certain western socities and person should be excused of these acts.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that prohibition to belching or burping is considered unethical in formal settings to avoid unnecessary situations. Therefore, one should be careful of creating these unauthorized situation in offices and other restricted areas.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that belching and other unacceptable behavior are sticktly banned in modern offices. Thus, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, therefore, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6038647343 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9923237225 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6834421235 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157423895224 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608876220545 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041081042361 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957024300953 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175023599061 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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