The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
– Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
– Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir,
I have been residing at Harni Vadodara from last ten years. I am writing this to complaint about the garbage collection system in our area. It seems that the system nowadays does not work properly.
Firstly, the garbage collection van does not come on time from last couple of weeks, earlier it came regularly in the morning. But presently, it comes in the afternoon so that everyone gets disturbed while it knocks out the door for collection of garbage. Due to the late collection, the bin gets full with garbage/rubbish. Secondly, the collection machine which lift the bins from road and deposit all the garbage in to van, by the time I have noticed that the garbage get leaked from bin and it spread over the entire road. Due to this, the bad odour gets spread and affects the surrounding environment. It leads to invite the disease and health problems.
Looking to above, I suggest first the collection van should come regularly in the morning to collect the garbage. Further, the machine for collecting garbage should be checked by mechanic and rectified it at earliest to avoid leakage problem of garbage.
I would appreciate your efforts if you could resolve this issue as earliest as possible. So that everyone can live peacefully in healthy environment.
Thank you,
Yours Faithfully,
Nisharg Chauhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I have been residing at Harni Vadodara f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lve this issue as earliest as possible. So that everyone can live peacefully in healthy...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03587443946 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65727515 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3314131658 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2142857143 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25859051959 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833719271325 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663000365273 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137136371041 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470471306362 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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