Write a letter to a friend of yours with whom you had a quarrel recently

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Write a letter to a friend of yours with whom you had a quarrel recently.

Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to apology for the fight I did with you last week because of your reason for not attending my wedding.

Let me tell you that all the wedding functions completed happily today and I missed you a lot in all of them. How can one miss the wedding of his childhood friend but now I understand that skipping office was not possible for you.

Actually, it was my love and true friendship behind my annoying behavior and quarrel with you. As wedding was the most special event of my life and you were not part of it. I felt very bad and even you will be missing in my wedding photo albums and vedio.

Now, I want you to visit my new home and meet my husband and his family as soon as possible. I have enclosed my wedding invitation card that mention my husband address and this time I do not want any excuse. Give my regards to uncle and aunt and love to SAM.
waiting to see you soon.
Warm Regards
Harry

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Waiting
...ds to uncle and aunt and love to SAM. waiting to see you soon. Warm Regards Harry...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... waiting to see you soon. Warm Regards Harry
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22448979592 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12499846877 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8439022901 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195886165794 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071289172714 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060808183347 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114034576417 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687841380839 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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