In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
Large shopping malls are spreading their wings in this modern era. they are taking over small shops because they are more convenient. Although, these are more preferred and this culture should be promoted but not at the cost of small shops. In this essay, I will analyze both facts of this proposal before reaching a logical conclusion.
To commence with, there are cascades of reasons to advocate shopping malls. In today’s busy world people do not have time to go from shop to shop for their daily needs, shopping malls are providing everything under one roof. they are equipped with air conditioners and escalators, so less fatigue is caused. Moreover, they have provision of baby sittings and a game section which makes it convenient for parents to shop around. they also have food courts and washroom which make them all the more luring.
Another convincing fact is, that they generate employment as number of people work in these malls. they generate more economy too. On the contrary, these things are missing in case of small shops, however, these also play a significant role to meet our daily basic needs. For example we will not go to a shopping mall to get milk, bread and eggs in the morning.
In conclusion, by weighing both the arguments up against each other, we can say that there is plethora of benefits of shopping malls over small shops. so it is predicted that this trend will be continued in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85365853659 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43367978106 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5369779332 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225210819781 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073995090356 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763457653515 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133838399744 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417938228382 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.5 Out of 90
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