In many countries today people are choosing to have fewer children. WHY is this the case? WHAT are the effects of this trend on society?
Nowadays, more and more families opt for having less number of children than before. Not only this essay will discuss the reasons behind this trend but it will also clarify some of its positive impacts on society.
There are two main explanations why many families are adopting the idea of birth control these days. Firstly, with each born child comes a great responsibility in terms of healthcare, education, activities and many others. In order to fulfill all these basic needs, parents should have a decent income that matches the soaring prices of such needs. Thus, having fewer children means better quality of life for each child. Secondly and more importantly, rearing children is an arduous mission these days. To illustrate, children nowadays are surrounded with vast numbers of hazards due to the negative effects of the digital era that they live in, social media pressure for example, which has made children more susceptible for inappropriate contents. Therefore, families with fewer children are more probably able to supervise their children and protect them.
Additionally, this trend has its positive development on society. If such trend becomes more prevalent, the financial burdens on the shoulders of the government will decrease dramatically by the decrease in the number of population. For instance, Egypt has been adopting birth control system since 2015, as the number of population reached 100 million, and this system has paid off as it has fixed the rate in birth by 2% since then. Moreover, when children receive proper education and supervision, they are more likely to become more stable and highly qualified citizens who can serve their communities and lead their countries to brighter future.
To conclude, the widespread phenomenon of having fewer children could be attributable to the financial state and the dire need of parents to protect the children, and it evidently has considerable benefits on society’s progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31511254019 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74229969322 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.754087897 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241675233091 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787616672233 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448804793934 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141328912907 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196700185808 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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