Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for child's development. While others think that it is important for a children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your opinion.
Education is the fundamental building block for children's development. However, the growth of students is very much dependent on the way of coaching. Some prefer that educating students at home, while others think it is necessary for children to attend schools. In this essay, before commenting my opinion, benefits of both the views are discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
Advantage of homeschooling can not be overlooked. The biggest pro for juveniles who are learning at home is the individual attention the tutor can give to them. As a result, it's not only deliver clear knowledge to the student, but the pace of such can also set, maintained, and adjusted as per need of the learners and the requirements of the course. The another benefit is, recipient of homes tution can enjoy a flexible schedule as deemed fit by the involved parties. This time section option can be a great tool to tune up the process of learning. Some adolescents find it easier to study at night, while others prefer to to do the same in a day time. What is more, a one-on-one session between a students being taught at home by his teacher establishes a social bond between them. This leads to an increased level of interactively which contributes assertively in the learning curve.
On the contrary, participants of group schools acquire some distinct advantages primarily due to the system, they get involved in. First and foremost would be social structure. Human is a social being and there is no any others places better than a public or private school, where children learn how to interact with others. Apart from this social property, which the students pick up in group schooling system is competition. They learn hoe to survive together and how to get ahead of other. A healthy competition among students teaches them the value of effort. Group schooling system make them the arrangement of specialized practical equipment feasible, which would ultimately enhance the learning experience of all the students.
In conclusion, it can be seen that both the aspects have their own merits. However, I tend to believe that in order to sustain in the actual world, student should be motivated to get educated in institutions rather than learning alone at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, so, while, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01336898396 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79651663766 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7145492875 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228920383046 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643497905901 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779957126346 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144144059755 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944657572803 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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