Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In recent years, many people believe that computers should be taken into the study as a direct means of teaching while others think that relying on computers too much make students face certain risk. I will discuss this topic and state my opinion in this essay.
On the one hand, Introducing computers into classrooms comes with some advantages. To start with, this new teaching method gives students a sense of excitement because of its novelty. In fact, students always study in a traditional way which is listening to the teacher about the boring theoretical knowledge without any changes for a long time. Therefore, a lesson taught via the computer with vivid images and attractive sound would make contribution to enhance the effect of the study of students. Additionally, this trend is really helpful for teachers .this is because they do not prepare teaching documents by manuscripts, resulting in decreasing their pressure time as well as the amount of work and saving more time.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks when students use computers in classrooms. First, using too much electric service lead them to health risk such as shortsighted, for example. Actually, the light from the screen of this device has extremely terrible impact on children’s eyes. Second, study time could be considered as a great occasion for students’ bad activities. For example, children use computer to log into social networks like Facebook, Youtube or play video games instead of learning, which leads to bad effect of their school performance.
In conclusion, although there are some negatives of the introduction of computer into the school, I strongly suppose that it is essential for children to get a new teaching method by computers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21126760563 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82212543763 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640845070423 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1380542426 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269594403253 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877753782729 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628582691728 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164264040678 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337681505803 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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