Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing? What are the reasons for that?
The importance of activities like skiing which can extremely dangerous was always a controversial issue. The substantial influence of skiing activities has sparked controversy over the potential impacts of this trends in some nation which is dangerous to their health. it can be agreed that, skiing would keep us fit and has some positive impacts, but some people claim that it has more negative impacts as well. this essay will elaborate how this skiing activities is dangerous and extreme.
At the outset, there are many reasons why people opted to do skiing as their leisure or past time. For instance, in U.S skiing has created 75% of people engage to it as their outdoor activities. Therefore, skiing activities can play a vital role in the people of U.S as its their own way to distress.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to belive that skiing is a dangerous activities and that would opt them to use other outdoor activities like picnic. As an illustration, often people use other activities that is safe and enjoyable for them.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that skiing is a dangerous activities and that the impact to some people is negative, although many people still enjoys it and they just need to be careful all the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86818181818 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65041319093 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536363636364 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7330973665 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313861541126 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135270748219 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622730231415 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178945450895 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362817794381 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.