Money is the best gift to give youths . Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Although it is sometimes thought that money is the best gift to present to youths, but some people disagree to this. In my opinion, while I believe that giving young adults money as present is good, offering them academic scholarship is better.
On the one hand, there are some who think that youths are best gifted with money because it would solve the financial problems that they are facing. Indeed, most of these young ones often have difficulties paying house rents, transportation costs and, perhaps, tuition fees while being students. In other words, they usually incur high cost of living which is draining their pockets. So, advocates of this view believe that these finance problems would be tackled if they are given money.
On the other hand, some people believe that gifting scholarship to adolescents is better as it might guarantee their success, and I believe.
At young age, education is a legacy that the majority of youths deserve to have, but many of them cannot afford it, especially the talented ones who are from a poor background. If these youths are offered all-paid tuition and, therefore, have access to quality education, then they would have a better chance in becoming successful individuals. Consequently, not only will the gift guarantee the success of the individuals but also the growth of the country.
In conclusion, while people vary in their opinions, I believe that giving money to young people as gift is good but financing their tuition is better largely due to the immense value that it will add to their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02298850575 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51052890665 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8097544988 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.181818182 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198122857136 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749488893164 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501575627825 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110347280456 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521650250236 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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