In under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinions and give examples
The impact of tourism in underdeveloped countries has always been a debatable topic. While some people fear that it will harm the cultural values of those nations, others believe that tourism will bring prosperity and boost the economy. This essay will discuss both sides and highlight important facts.
The significance of tourism has increased in recent years and many countries are spending a hefty amount of their budgets on the development of new resorts and upgrading the network of facilities associated with it. Tourism is believed to improve the economic conditions as it brings foreign investments with it. It was reported in a survey that Malaysia is earing around 200 Billion dollars through the tourism industry and is contributing a big part in shaping the economy of the country. Keeping in view the positive effects of tourism, many countries have started to focus more on its development.
There are also myriad of concerns by some people that although tourism has numerous benefits yet it will have some negative effects on the cultural heritage of the hosting nations. It can also lead to environmental impacts that affect cultural diversity. A research of a prestigious university shows that being a tourism magnet has an effect on the cultural degradation. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of cultural values.
To conclude, keeping in view the above-stated arguments it can be derived that positives of the tourism development far outweigh its negative aspects. Not only that the tourism industry improves the economics of the countries, but it also helps the local businesses and upgrades the living standard of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...impacts that affect cultural diversity. A research of a prestigious university shows that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22388059701 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83180194398 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2648664736 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148522663026 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523220862976 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337190795565 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924022847951 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388398057905 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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