People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about?
The issue which frequently generates a great deal of heated debate that nowadays, people are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life and the problem is certainly discussed in contemporary world. Many academics contend that for better life, people should move to urban areas from rural areas. this essay will express the complete agreement with this notion and will justify my viewpoint.
To commence with, there are wide range of arguments to support the aforementioned statement. However, the most conspicuous one lies in the fact this is not remote or complicated but accessible and practical. it has long been considered perfectly justified by proponents to assume that in rural areas, there is no well education system. Furthermore, it is asserted that there is no good transport system and other facilities. A classic example of this occurring is statistics revealed by UN clearly demonstrates that approximately sixty nations prefer to follow this trend.
Another convincing fact to ascertain this is that in urban areas there are more opportunities to get good employment in convenient way. Besides, it seems incontrovertible that in urban areas, education structure is very well compare with rural areas. A relevant example is nations world over have observed a dramatic shift in the opinion of public regarding this issue.
In the view of argument discussed above, it is my considered opinion that advantages overweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37662337662 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95561007095 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7607156021 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26292054063 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927323250239 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164053979703 0.071462118173 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140357507887 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1796798332 0.0609392437508 295% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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