Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, stars such as singers, sports celebrities or actors are paid lot of money. Some people believe that it is not fair because they just doing what they like. Thinking about sports, such as, persons usually say that football players are paid too much for something that people doing for hobby.
I am agree to degree with this type of consideration. Film stars sometimes spend months filming, so they are far away from their family or their normal life. Moreover, considering film celebrities or singers, people pay to go to the cinema or to go to a concert, and beyond a film or a exhibition, there are weeks of work. A sport star could earn million of dollars in a year, but it is because there are sponsors, because people want to see match, because it is the most popular entertainment in every country.
On the other hand, there are other types of job that should be paid more. For example doctors, which have in their hands the life of people and they have spent years and years studying. Not only doctors, but also nurses: they are not paid enough for what they do. In hospital, they are essential for patient, they have horrible shifts, but they are not well paid.
To sum up, it is true that people who doing jobs that are not linking with life saving earn more money than doctors of nurses, for example, but it is also true that there is a different business beyond film stars or pop singers, and I do not think that they could be compared.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ng that people doing for hobby. I am agree to degree with this type of considerati...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...o go to a concert, and beyond a film or a exhibition, there are weeks of work. A ...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... weeks of work. A sport star could earn million of dollars in a year, but it is because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52830188679 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27220579797 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543396226415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1573746287 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28254561546 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10976480194 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638750172473 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170976804126 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471862419578 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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