Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
A group of people have perception that money is the only crucial source for human being towards happiness. Proper income source always a key element to satisfied the expensive needs which obtains happiness in one's life. However, other aspects also in consideration rather than money for joy in life.
Among the various aspects, the foremost one is, people having a good amount of money can live a rich life. The items which are costly and provides comfort, wealthy people can easily get it. As a result, it leads happiness to the person or family. Moreover, to reduce the stress from busy life individual can choose the option of international tour. Travelling to undiscovered places over the world makes people feel cheer and provide relaxation from daily routine which is just a imagination for general public.
On the other side, without money people can be joyful too. To begin with, a good relationship always one of the reason for being happy in life. Proper bonding always creates strong relationship with others. For instance, good understanding and attachment between family members creates happy family in the society. Additionally, hobby is one of the focal interest of the human to remove loneliness from life and make it excited. People living alone in the strange city find the company with their hobby and pass the leisure time and make life happening.
All in all, in this materialist world there are several ways to be happy. But, it depends on the viewpoints of human that from where they feel the satisfaction of the life which makes person happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98098859316 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5433539373 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7025918237 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375352961862 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115110961545 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638522465768 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218035143029 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733167476125 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.