Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree.
Some people say that authority may reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. In this statement i am partly agree with the given statement, government may reduce money in music and arts and invest their money in other sector too. My further inclination would be explain in the following paragraphs.
To start with, governments reduce their investment in arts; music and painting field and invest their money on infrastructure, economy, job creation, foreign investment and so on. In other word, if Indian government invest their money in foreign so India make strong interpersonal relationship with opponent country. As a result country improve their economic growth as well as also increase job employment ratio not only in their country but also foreign too.
On the other hand, investing in art, music and painting field can get prestige not only person but also country on international. For example, Arijit singh has good command in singing. Additionaly , by giving ousting performance in music field, he became rising star of their nation and his story gives motivational spirits to younger generation that how an ordinary boy could reach higher level of the nation.
To conclude, investing money by government in music and art field have some advantages but in my point of view invest money in foreign country and other sectors gives strong relationship with other country and increase the financial growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, as a result, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2576419214 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73331335385 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580786026201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6409413294 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349749547845 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150528516113 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138090840734 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220326588108 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11753857417 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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