At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In many countries, young adults are more in numbers than older ones. Having a younger population brings many advantages for countries but there are few disadvantages as well but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for sure.
To begin with, the young population is the prime workforce of a country. The gross domestic product is higher in the countries which have younger residents. Owing to the very same reason it has been observed that many developed countries like the US, Canada and Australia are opening their doors for young immigrants. What is more, having less number of elder people means the country have to spare fewer resources after the wellbeing of them.
Secondly, Young generation with full of energy and with new ideas pushes the horizons of science and technology, which improves the overall quality of life for people of the country. For Instance, India, China and Pakistan are on top in software industries as these countries' IT sectors are full of young talent.
On the other hand, more young population means more competition, Youth have to do more struggle for employment. The rise in crime rate is one of the side effects of having more unemployed young adults. Furthermore, elders are more experienced, they provide the guidance to fresh blood, without this guidance most of young energy goes astray.
In conclusion, young and old people are the pillar of society. More young population has some disadvantages but with the right effort by the government, these demerits can be curb. Hence, the pros of having more young adults in population far outweigh the cons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 309, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the young') or simply say ''most young''.
Suggestion: most of the young; most young
...e to fresh blood, without this guidance most of young energy goes astray. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15209125475 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64528953216 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9799311265 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242384211606 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089557680506 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471899484723 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145214677336 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059699691036 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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