A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is important to every citizen of every country in the world.The prompt explains that a nation should require all of its students study the same curriculum until they enter college.I mostly disagree to this issue by stating three important evidences.
Firstly,every country in the world have many states and provinces which have diverse cultures and langauges spoken.For instance,India is a country with many states and people in each state communicate through their own regional langauges.So,it would be difficult for students in each state to follow the same natural curriculum until they enter college.
Secondly,countries around the world have large number of people with disparate skill sets and each one of them have their own goals as to what they want to pursue in their life.Moreover,following similar national curriculum would not help the cause of these people to suceed in different fields.
On the contrary,following same curriculum for students until they start studying in college also helps the students to become professional students in their life as kinder school and high school are the base for every student inorder to be sucessful in life.Perhaps,following same curriculum until college would benefit each and every student to achieve each one's desired dreams.
In conclusion,I would like to conclude that following the same curriculum until college would have it's own set of advantages and disadvantages depending on the perspective in which one see's it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52813852814 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33317591128 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541125541126 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.508345341 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 255.4 118.986275619 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.2 23.4991977007 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.8 5.21951772744 418% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370948720613 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212054482889 0.0831039109588 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133991528692 0.0758088955206 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212054482889 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133991528692 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 14.1392134831 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 48.8420337079 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.