Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The given arguement in the letter vouches for investments in unmanned space probes and satellites, and lists out various arguements to support its conclusion. However, there are certain fallacies and unwarranted assumptions in the letter that need to be pointed out before a careful consideration of it's conclusions. For example, the 'recent' success of the unmanned probes and satellites do not mention the statisctics and the number of successful lanuches and also the kind of success it achieves. Another patent unwarranted assumption made is that whther these unmanned missions made able to perform the tasks and meet objectives that a manned mission sets out to meet. Lets explore and analyse some of these assumptions in detail.
Firstly, the letter talkes about the recent successes of the unmanned missions, and the great deal of information gathered from them. However, the author of the letter does not elaborate this statement any further, neither does she support it with relevant facts and figures.There is a need to understand the types of success these mission achieve as well as the type of data that they are capable of capturing. It is possible that the objectives of a manned mission - their definition of 'success' and the type of data that they aim to capture - are completely different from those of an unmanned mission, and require rigorous human interference and research that cannot be automated by an unmanned mission. In such a case, an unmanned mission cannot replace its counterpart solely because of the costs and risks involved.
In addition to the type of success, the author also fails to quantify the "recent successes" of the unmanned missions. One can accept the fact that there might have been some recent success in this domain, but investing further into it without a knowlege of the 'depth and breadth of these successes' in the domain just does not seem right. It is possible that the unmanned satellite mission teams have been making some short trips for a shorter duration of time in space, as opposed to manned missions spending months and years on some planet which is certain light-years away. Also it is possible that, there have been only a few recent successes in the unmanned missions,for example,some ten odd successful missions; as opposed to a hundred successful ones by its manned counterpart, which has been operative since long before the idea of sending robots into space was conceived. In such a case, it is quite clear that a possiblity of unmanned mission being in its nascent staged of development exists, and thus still requires to go a long way before it can replace manned missions.
Also an important assumption here is that the further investement in umanned mission would not incur as much costs as manned missions do. It is possible that, technological advancements make automation a much more costly process than manned missions. Also, not knowing the ulterior motives of the author of the letter is a fallacy. It is very well possible that the author is a official of the unammned satellite department looking to gather funds, through advertising the cons of the manned missions in a well-known magazine.
Thus it is important for facts, a
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 672, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...that a manned mission sets out to meet. Lets explore and analyse some of these assum...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...port it with relevant facts and figures.There is a need to understand the types of su...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mission' or 'these missions'?
Suggestion: this mission; these missions
...need to understand the types of success these mission achieve as well as the type of data tha...
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Line 9, column 588, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...anet which is certain light-years away. Also it is possible that, there have been on...
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Line 9, column 682, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...ecent successes in the unmanned missions,for example,some ten odd successful mission...
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Line 9, column 694, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...ses in the unmanned missions,for example,some ten odd successful missions; as opposed...
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Line 9, column 1039, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...lopment exists, and thus still requires to go a long way before it can replace manned...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...it can replace manned missions. Also an important assumption here is that th...
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Line 15, column 105, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...t in umanned mission would not incur as much costs as manned missions do. It is poss...
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Line 15, column 377, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s very well possible that the author is a official of the unammned satellite depa...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...missions in a well-known magazine. Thus it is important for facts, a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, still, thus, well, for example, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2704.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 531.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0922787194 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80368620634 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470809792844 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 839.7 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5609118774 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.315789474 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9473684211 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0485929199208 0.243740707755 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0173378696657 0.0831039109588 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0178195756573 0.0758088955206 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0318457664869 0.150359130593 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016705703019 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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