In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from that of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?
Father and mother are playing equally essential roles in the process of their children's growing up. However, in some countries, their importance and responsibilities are quite different. In this essay I will analyse the reasons and discuss the possible changes of their roles in the future.
There are several reasons for the difference of father and mother in some countries due to their traditional societal structure. On the one hand, in some countries, men are carrying on the responsibility as a breadwinner of a family. Their main tasks are supporting family financially. As a consequence, in most cases they are outside and their time spending with children is limited. On the other hand, in those areas women's role is working as housewives and some of them are even deprived from working outside. So they spend much more time educating their children and have a closer sensational relationship to their offspring than fathers. However, this imbalanced family relationship structure is harmful for children's physical and mental healthy on their way of growing up.
Fortunately, with the process of feminism and gender equality, an inceasing number of mothers begin to work and carry on the financial supporting while more fathers have more time and opportunities to accompany with their children and this is definitely a positive trend. Fathers can bring bravery, powerfulness and broader horizons to their children which cannot be provided by most mothers. With fathers' education, children's personality will development more completely. On the flip side, in the future mothers will concentrate more on children's delicate care, which can make their children's daily care in a higher quality. Therefore, although their educational roles are not the same in detail, they will shoulder equal responsibilities together for their children's better development.
In conclusion, the different roles in parenting result from some traditional and historical reasons. But in the future with the development of the society and people's change of view, fathers and mothers' responsibilitie will develop as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47706422018 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01969147415 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522935779817 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8438752687 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.352941176 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210558487245 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847891220031 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812358267753 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181632240762 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100440031144 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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