Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that develop the mind, such as reading and doing crossword puzzles. Others feel that it is important to give one’s mind a rest in leisure time. Discus
Recently, leisure time has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what activities must people do in their leisure time?". Whereas it is a widely held view that entertainment activities are very important, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the psychology standpoint, leisure activities are bound up inextricably with mind, which indicates they lead to both mental and physical acts. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between exercise and old-fashioned works as well as an exponential increase in relaxation. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of brain development is correlated positively with not only reading books rate but also crossword puzzles.
Within the realm of public perspective, without the slightest doubt, leisure time attribute to entertainment works, in that it would come down to fun, amusing, and imagination. A salient example of such attribution is, playing which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take creativity for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint stressful lifestyle problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of choosing the happiest ones to less depression.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that more consideration must be taken into account to select leisure
activities. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80524344569 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20399234046 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711610486891 0.580463131201 123% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2322462474 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230684970227 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062173749667 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735348476077 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100595585419 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698249390386 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.