Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Write at least 250 words
A group of people has argued that a nation's health can be improved if the government drafts and enforces legal acts regarding nutritious foods while another is of the opinion that matters health are personal choices and responsibilities. In my opinion, health is equally a government's responsibility as much as it is an individual's. In this essay, I will be examining both aspects.
First and foremost, the government owes it to its people to ensure that the food which they consume is well-balanced and wholesome by enforcing strict laws on how food is grown, processed and stored and ensuring that manufacturers provide nutritional values of their end products for the consumers. Laws and policies on growing, processing and storage of food will ensure that farmers use the right pesticides and insecticides when growing food, and in cases of livestock and poultry farming, each farmer will be required to adhere to policies such as timely deworming and routinely seeking veterinary services which will facilitate early detection and treatment of diseases. Additionally, manufacturers will also be obliged to handle foods with most caution from processing to storage, and ensuring that their end products have indexed information on the nutritional values of all nutrients. Moreover, with legal acts, bodies that supervise food processing and manufacturing industries and will be formed if not already in existence. These authorities will be mandated to ensure compliance to policies on food handling and proper storage. They will also be tasked with the responsibility of bringing to book those who are caught breaking the law. For example, there have been trending videos on the internet which show chicken being injected with drugs to fatten them with an aim of increasing the income generated from sales: such heinous acts would be avoided if there was stricter supervision and prosecution by governing authorities.
Secondly, it is an individual's responsibility to see to it that they are in good health by making choices which positively impact their wellbeing such as making their own food and seeking dietary information from professionals. Preparing and making food at home other than take away from eateries and restaurants ensures that an individual is aware of the ratios of the foods which they are consuming thus ensuring that they consume healthier and balanced foods. Additionally, people are responsible for seeking information on their dietary requirements based on their health needs from professionals such as nutritionists, and from the internet which is well equipped with the necessary information. For example, any person who has a lifestyle disease such as diabetes shows a better prognosis when they adhere strictly to the information and dietetic counselling which they receive.
In summary, there are various arguments about public health with a portion of people believing that it can be improved by the government making policies on nutritious foods, while another thinks that it is a personal choice and responsibility. In view of this argument, I think that health is both a government's responsibility by ensuring that there are stricter laws governing farming and food manufacturing, formation of regulating bodies and authorities to enact such laws, as well as an individual's responsibility to make choices such as cooking their own food and seeking nutritional information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in summary, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 25.0 7.30460921844 342% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2892.0 1615.20841683 179% => OK
No of words: 534.0 315.596192385 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41573033708 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10070289715 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47191011236 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 890.1 506.74238477 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5214925236 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.75 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.375 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268992079194 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106462061448 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106171417769 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226924002168 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136141273171 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.